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Critique Alice Twemlow
Date 09_23_2010
Duration 47:00:00
Location Alice's office_School of Visual Arts_New York City
Alice suggested exploring language and thinking about the message as a question that could persuade or provoke the viewer. She felt that the bold statement was an anachronistic throwback to the WPA era of government public service campaigns.
Explore language and pose it as a question
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Critique Jessica Helfand
Date 09_29_2010
Duration 23:58:00
Location Yale University_New Haven_CT
Jessica described design as improvisation. She encouraged me to step away form the computer, get my hands dirty, and experiment with depicting germs. She felt overall that the poster felt too digital and hygienic, so she encouraged me to explore new materials.
Investigate form and improvise with germs
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Critique Maira Kalman
Date 10_05_2010
Duration 25:54:00
Location Maira's apartment_New York City
Maira felt that the message should be delivered with humor and in a gentler way. She didn't want to feel as though she was in grave danger when she was simply going to wash her hands. She proposed incorporating narrative through image or language.
Createhumor through narrative
Alice suggested exploring language and thinking about the message as a question that could persuade or provoke the viewer. She felt that the bold statement was an anachronistic throwback to the WPA era of government public service campaigns.
Jessica described design as improvisation. She encouraged me to step away form the computer, get my hands dirty, and experiment with depicting germs. She felt overall that the poster felt too digital and hygienic, so she encouraged me to explore new materials.
Maira felt that the message should be delivered with humor and in a gentler way. She didn't want to feel as though she was in grave danger when she was simply going to wash her hands. She proposed incorporating narrative through image or language.